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Friday, December 1, 2017

Selfie Cat Writing

This week we have been watching a video about Selfie Cat, we had to watch the video very carefully and write a amazing piece of writing about it. I made a long story about it and I hope you like it, and have a great day😎👍.

W.A.L.T: Use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language features to describe the setting and what is happening.

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Selfie Cat

One Sunny bright day, I was in my mansion that was on the edge of the hill, by the beach. The sun was shining bright in my sitting room and my couch that I was sitting on, the cat was lazy and sleeping in her bed couch. My name is Rover, I am 16 years old, I was checking the  instacat because to see who is in the first place that has the cutest picture of their cats. Then a note came up, it said that I was in the first place that has the cutest pictures of the cats.

“Woohoo!!!.” I shouted in an excitement, I started commenting to people and their pictures. Then I heard my fat cat yawning, you know why she is fat because everytime when I take picture of her and me I give her treats as much as she wants. But she eats a lot and all the time, then a new notification came up, it said that, “Noooooo, she is in first place.” I shouted in a angry voice.

I was red as a fresh tomato that my head was about to blow up, I quickly found my cat trying to struggle getting into her small toilet. I pulled her out, anyways her name is Alpha. She is a very fat cat that’s why she is struggling to get in, so I pulled her out of there and force her to take a picture with me.

Then she tried to scratch my face but it was too close, next she tried to poke my beautiful brown eye. Next I picked up my tablet and tried to take a photo with my cat, then she tried to kick my face. Then I it took a photo, it was not a very good photo. “Ouchhie.” I said in a horrified voice. My cat pulled me off my couch and I fell on the floor hard, next my cat tried to run but I caught her just in time.

“MEOW.” My cat said in a rage voice. I was in a rage mode too and I went to get my phone, and grabbed my cat. Grabbed my phone and took a photo. Suddenly my cat betrayed me, she bit my hand and it was bleeding very bad. “Ahhhh.” I said in a sorrowful voice. Then she tried to run away from me again, I grabbed her tail and picked my phone up and picked Alpha up.

Next suddenly she grabbed the piano with her razor sharp claws, I pulled her tail very hard like I was a bulldozer. Then I falsely let go of her tail and I sling shot her into the black piano, next I went to get her but she made an angry growl at me, I was so frightened. I slowly went towards the piano, closer and closer and closer and, “MEEEEOOOOWWWW.” as she leapfrogged at me.

My heart was beating faster and faster like a race car going 100 miles per hour, I my cats mouthy was wide open like she was about to chop my hand. When I fell my phone slip from my hand took a photo, next my cat published it by walking over it and went to its toilet to pee. I was so sad, suddenly after that, I was getting lots of likes because people thought that the cat was trying to pounce on me and give me a hug.

I was happy and thanks to my cat he will get lots of treat for that photo….

Maybe that's how she got fat, I fed her too much, hahahahahahahaha.

THE END

Thursday, October 26, 2017

My story about Pigeon Impossible

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about my experience and have a great day 😎.


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Pigeon Impossible

One beautiful day, I was walking down the street with my agent suit on so the other agents around the world see each other and let them do their missions. Today I am on a mission to take this suitcase to a safe place.

Any ways, my name is Walter Beckett,                                                                          I am a junior agent, I am still learning how to be a proper agent. When I crossed the road, I saw the proper agent with the suitcase. I went towards him, got the suitcase from him then took it by the bench to open it.

When I opened it the screen turned on and I started working on my work about the rocket launch. when I started working, a pigeon came and stood on the bench, then I gave a piece of Doughnut to the pigeon. The pigeon didn’t went to get it then it flew on me.

I threw the Doughnut🍩  towards the ground and then the pigeon went towards my case and got stuck in it, I was so worried if the pigeon pressed something. When I went closer to the case, the case started moving, the pigeon started screaming then it went silent.

I went closer very slowly like a turtle🐢 or like slowpoke, then the case started moving faster and faster. Until it scared a woman dressed in a pink dress, next it came back then started shooting lasers.

I quickly hid behind the door, I was so scared that my heart started beating faster and faster like a super sports car, nissan gtr going hundred miles per hour. When it stopped shooting, I ran towards it to get it before it takes off. But it was too late to get it, the pigeon started screaming again and started destroying the world.

Well it was only destroying Washington D.C, when it destroyed all the cars and the buildings I started thinking of a solution to get that pigeon off the case. After thinking, I remembered about the doughnut that the greedy pigeon wanted.

So I rushed to the pigeon with my case, I held the doughnut high on my hands then the pigeon pointed the laser gun at me, I was worried if he was gonna shoot me then I saw a burning car. I held the doughnut above the steaming fire that was on the black mustang car, When I held the doughnut above the fire the pigeon came down and opened the case and peeked from the case.

I called the pigeon, after that the pigeon slowly came out of the case to get the doughnut. When the pigeon was out I rushed to get it but it was too late, AGAIN!!!. The pigeon pushed another button that you shoot missiles from, I was scared so I stopped and then held the doughnut in front of me.

Then the pigeon slowly came out again then I threw it in the air, the pigeon looked up in the air then I pushed the pigeon, next I got up and cleaned my suit. Suddenly I heard a noise that was loud and it started hurting my ears. “Oh no, I think I just launched the.” got interrupted by the noise.

It was the rocket I launched but I did not know how it launched. I was scared, I quickly checked on the computer that where the rocket was aiming, then on my screen came up with, MOSCOW RUSSIA!!!. I tried to think of something to do about it, then it launched into the air and off it went to Russia.

I tried thinking then I knew what to do, I pushed the button that was on the corner of my computer. Next the jet rockets appeared from the sides of the computer then I took off into the air. Once I took off I looked down, my heart was about to burst out of my chest, I was so high that I was about to faint.

I looked up at the rocket and pushed the laser gun button, when I was about to fire the same pigeon came and pushed me I shot somewhere else. Then I looked for the pigeon then I saw it on my case, I pushed the rocket button that was in my case.

Then the rocket came out from my case, next I looked at the pigeon fiercely. Next the pigeon got worried then I opened the case, the doughnut flew out from my case and then I pushed the launch button. The rocket went towards the bigger rocket and went closer, closer and closer then, BOOM!!!.

The rocket blew up and then I lowered the power of my case and I slowly went down onto the ground. When I landed safely onto the ground the pigeon was by the bench where me and my enemy pigeon met in the first place, I watched as a part of the rocket falling from the sky towards the pigeon.

My mission was complete and I walked to my secret basement, this was pigeon impossible mission for me but I finished it. I am now a proper agent.

THE END


Friday, September 1, 2017

My Terrifying Experience

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about my experience and have a great day 😎.

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My Experience


One day in a early morning, the water was sparkling like a diamond, the sun raised from the sea and into the sky and shined like gold. The mountains were big and sharp like a sharp knife, any ways, my name is Danny. I was in my small, white wooden boat, I was sailing through the sparkling sea, I pedaled with my two pedals to the mountains to ride my bike on the top of the mountain.

Once we reached to the land, I jumped out of the front of the boat then I took out my black and pink bike and sat on the soft seat and started my journey to the mountains, I rode my bike over sharp rocks and steep rocks. Suddenly, I reached to a steep log that I had to cross, my heart started beating 100 miles per hour. I took a deep breath in, then let it go. I started paddling slowly and I made it to the other side of the steep log and then I leaped rock to rock and landed safely on the ground.

I reached to the waterfall, the water was sparkling like crystal, the water was crashing into a pond, the water was fresh and clear to swim in. I leaped across the steep waterfall with my bike, I made it safely to the other side of the waterfall. I was so excited that I wasn’t even scared at all, then I rode over a steep hill then went over sharp rocky rocks and made at the top of the hill. I jumped, leaped and bounced over waterfalls and hills.

Then I got off my bike, then i picked my bike up and onto my shoulder then walked up the steep rocky mountain. Once I reached up at the top of the of the mountain, I got on my bike and rushed down the rocky mountain, I felt the cold air while I was riding my bike, it was nice and cold. Once I reached down the mountain I went rode my bike up the mountain that was beside the mountain I went up in the first place.

I rode my bike up the mountain. Next, I saw a straight rocky path, so I crossed the rocky path that had sharp rocks. Once I crossed the rocky path, I picked up my bike again and climbed a very steep mountain. I climbed and climbed until my legs were wobbling like jelly, my legs were tired, but I tried my best to reach at the top of the mountain.

Once I reached the top, I was puffed, I was tired and my heart was beating 100 miles per hour. I putted my bike down and got onto my bike, the clouds were all around me, they were cold and soggy wet. The sun shined bright in my legs and arms making it warm. The view was great and amazing, no one ever made this way up.

After looking at the view, I picked up my bike and climbed down, then got on my bike and rode down the mountain. I came to a steep slippery path, I crossed it slowly then once I made it I came to a broken path. So I pedaled faster than jumped from a high rock to a lower rock. Then I pedaled even faster like I never pedaled faster before.

After that, I came to a pond, so I crossed it, but I did not get wet. I jumped rock to rock that was in the pond. Once I crossed  the clear blue pond, I raced to the beach. The sun was going into the sea so I quickly rushed to the beach and watch the sunset. Once I reached by the grass land I saw a fence right in front of me.

I braced myself and pedaled a bit more faster then once I reached the fence, I hit it by my front wheel, I leaned forwards, and did a front flip with my bike. The I landed on the soft sand, I rode my bike until I was just in time to watch the sunset. It was my best experience ever in my life.

THE END

Thursday, August 17, 2017

My story about The catch

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about The Catch and have a great day😎.

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The Catch

One day in a early morning, there was a boy named Parowa he was 11 years old and he was the only child in the village. Everyone in his village wanted him to get a big fish for everyone. But that boy couldn’t, he couldn’t catch one single fish. But his dad told him that if he doesn't, he will be punished.

He picked up his leaf hat, his fishing rod and his basket and went to the lake. Once he reached the lake he was tired, thirsty and hungry, and there was a problem, the lake was drying and the fishes were gone. But not all of them, they were little ones, so he swung my fishing rod and threw the rods string in the lake.

He felt a pull so he pulled as hard as he could and a little fish came out and then landed on the ground. He picked it up and then dropped it in the basket. He was sad so he didn’t mind, he knew that there will be more big fish.

Then suddenly he heard a scream behind the bushes, so he creeped towards the bush and looked behind the bushes. It was a fox stuck by a vine around one of its legs, He picked up his knife and cut the vine in half. The fox turned around and then he pounced at the boy, he fell down and the fox climbed on his chest and made a angry looking face.

Then the fox smelled something, the fox ran to his basket and sat down, The boy was looking at his face and the smiled at him and took the fish from the boys basket. The fox ran and under the thorn bush, the boy tried catching the fox so he went under the thorn bush, once he was on the other side of the thorn bush he saw the fox and tried catching it.

The fox went up the big hill and the boy was scared, so he tried his best and then the fox made it on the top of the hill and ran. The boy climbed until his favourite fell down, he was angry because of that fox so he started climbing faster.

Once he reached the top of the hill he saw fogs and couldn’t see the fox anywhere until the fogs were gone and could see the fox now. He was sitting by a big ocean. The boy was amazed, then the fox threw the fish in the ocean and it swimmed away.

Parowa was happy with the fox now so he started fishing here and then a big fish jumped so he caught it with his big fishing rod and he got a almost little fish and gave it to the fox. Then the boy went home to have fish for dinner. Then the fox started thinking about how kind he was and that wasn’t the fox, it was the god.

THE END

My story about Friendly Parrot

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about The friendly Parrot and have a great day😎.

Here's the picture




The Friendly Parrot

One day in the middle of the night, the sky was dark like a black hole. The thunder roared like a lion, straight rain falls all over town. Everyone was inside their house sitting by the warm red fire that was blazing by the chimney. That day in the scary night, a little child named Serena was sleeping in her bed but she couldn’t sleep at all.

Her legs started shaking, her mouth was shaking too, she hid under her blanket and waited until she sleeps but she couldn’t. She was scared because there was a parrot right next to her, she was scared of Parrots because last time there was a Parrot that came and sat by her and the girl Serena thought it was trying to hurt her, but it wasn’t. Her mum tried to tell her that the Parrot didn’t attacked her, it was trying to be nice.

But Serena didn’t trusted them and kept saying that the Parrot did attack her, so here mum and dad brought her a parrot to prove that parrots don’t attack. Serena was scared like she was about to die, her heart started beating faster like a car going 100 miles per hour. SHe tried to close her eyes and sleep.

Then the parrot that was green and yellow with silver stripes on it’s wings started screaming like a tiger attacked it. Then the Parrot landed on the Serena’s head and then started sleeping on the girl’s head. The girl started crying so loud that her mum and dad came rushing to her room. Serena told them that the Parrot was attacking her, mum and dad was not happy.

Her dad told her that the parrot was just sleeping on her head because the parrots cage was cold, so the girl thought for a minute what happened when she got attacked by the bird. Then she knew that it wasn’t attacking her, it was asking for food. Then she knew that birds don’t attack and she was happy. So she went to her bed and slept in her soft cozy bed and waited for the morning.

THE END

Thursday, August 10, 2017

The Dogs life

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about Big Bird Problem and have a great day😎.

Here is the picture we had to look at and write a story about it.

The Dog’s life

Once upon a time, the cloud raised in the fresh clear blue sky. The sun shined bright just like diamond, crystal, ruby, emerald and gold. The sun's red spark around the sun was coloured like a bright red tomato. The wind was nice and warm, the sand was warm and soft like a cat’s fur.

A light yellowish coloured pug was running along the beach by sprinting and the owner was resting on his chair and drinking lemonade, the owner of the pug was enjoying the sun and his yummy home made lemonade, he took a long sip of the lemonade and ahhhh!!!.

The pug was enjoying so much that he wasn’t even looking, he hit his owner then the pug got sad that what he did to his owner so he ran away from his owner. The owner was so angry that he turned red as a tomato, so he got up on his legs and started looking for his dog to punish him.

The owner looked and looked no matter how hard he tried, he couldn’t find his dog, the owner was sad, his face turned upside down and quickly got all the stuff he had brought to the beach and ran to his car. He named his pink car, it’s name is Speedy the toyota supra car, he put all his stuff in the car and he zoomed home to call the pet control.

4 hours later

The pug was walking down the street looking for its favourite food, chocolate cupcake, he walked down the street until suddenly. The pug’s legs were tired, its legs started shaking like an earthquake, the pug was about to fall to the ground that it was about to die, the pug tried to stand up but he fell. The pug was sad until he smelled something delicious, he stood up straight and followed the smell.

The pug followed the smell until it stopped by a bench, he saw something yummy, something that he likes the most, he’s favourite food that was sitting on the bench, a chocolate cupcake, his face turned into a happy face. Hr raced to the bench to eat the chocolate cupcake, until suddenly. A seagull came and picked up the cupcake with it’s sharp nails and went away to eat it somewhere else.

The pug stopped, and looked up, the pug got sad again, he howled and howled until, a blue van with white stripes came by and picked the pug up and put it in a cage and in the van. The dog was sad because he knew it was the pet control van, the van quickly zoomed all the way to the pet control centre. Once they arrived at the pet control centre the two pet keepers went to the back of the van, opened the door and grabbed the cage that the pug was in and took it at the vet.

Once they arrived at the vet they checked the put if it was okay, then they went back to their pet control centre and waited for its owner to come and pick it’s pug up and take it home. Once the pugs owner arrived at the pet control centre the owner was happy to see its pug okay, the owner thanked them then took the pug home in its car Speedy.

Once they arrived home the pug was hungry and asked for food by making a cute puppy sound, and the owner had made him a special treat for its pug, 20 chocolate cupcakes. That made the pug happy that he jumped onto its owner and started licking him on the face, and both of them watched a movie together. The owner was happy that he got his pug back and the pug is happy that he is home with his owner.

THE END

Thursday, August 3, 2017

My story about Big Bird Problem

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing. I hope you like my story about Big Bird Problem and have a great day😎.

Click here to watch Big Bird Problem

The big Bird Problem


Once upon a time, in the early morning, the sun raised in the clear sky, it shone like a diamond, the clouds moved away from the sun. A little bird named Snob was alone because he wanted peace and quiet. He sat on a wire and just rested its wings and relaxed in the sun. Snob liked the sun because it warmed its features and the features made him warm, he wanted to stay here forever.


Until a little bird named Sky came by and wanted to rest its wings too, her wings were sweaty like she was melting like snow, her head turned red like she was about to fall to the ground, so she rested on the wire too.Snob turned red like a red tomato, he didn’t want her near him so he told Sky to go away from him. Then suddenly more birds came, they started arguing because they wanted to stay alone by themselves, but they said no because they wanted to stay on the wire that the other birds were standing on.


They argued until they all the little birds heard a noise, even Snob and Sky. They all looked to the side of the wire and there stood a big blue bird with a long yellow beak. “Hello there” big bird said nicely. All the little birds started laughing. “I think that flightless bird is trying to make friends with us” Snob said while laughing.


The big bird didn’t cry and he wasn’t sad, he just smiled because he really wanted a friend to hang out with. So he was a friendly one, so he said hello again, the birds went away from the big bird because they did not want to be his friend, so the little birds started speaking to each other about the big bird.


“I think the big bird is flightless and we are not flightless so he can’t be our friend, he is heavy too.” Snob said quietly to Sky. Sky disagree to Snob because everyone is different, Snob still agree that he is no match for us little birds. Then the big bird came and sat with them on the electric wire. Sky went away and sat where the big bird sat in the first place and watched them.


Suddenly the wire went down because there were too many birds sitting on one wire, but not Sky. The wire went all the way down touching the road, then it went a little up and it stopped. The birds didn’t know that  because they didn’t like looking at his face, Snob was angry that it made him peck the big bird with its sharp little beak.


Then suddenly, Snob and the other little bird had an idea, next Snob and the other bird started pecking the big bird’s feet with its sharp beak. The other birds started cheering the two birds that was pecking the big bird but Sky didn’t. Then one bird realized that we were near at the ground. Then that bird told the other birds that we were close to the ground, after that  they all looked down.


“Stop pecking  bird’s feet, we are close to the ground.” little bird said loudly. Then the big bird landed on the ground softly and the little birds got shot in the air leaving their features behind. But Sky did not because she was watching them. Then the little birds came down and onto the ground, they had a bad landing.


The big bird started laughing and offered the little bird a feature, because he was naked. All of them were so they ran away and Sky watched them ran and she started laughing. The big bird went away to find friends and then Sky came, she asked the big bird that can she be his friend and the big bird accepted, after that the two birds went away together making more new friends.

THE END

Friday, July 28, 2017

My story about Presistent Pigeon

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing. I hope you like my story about Presistent Pigeon😎.

Presistent Pigeon

Once upon a time, it was an early morning, the shone shone bright in the sky like gold. There was not a cloud in the sky and the sky colour was fresh blue like a fresh sea or ocean, on the rooftop of the hotel lived three little baby pigeons also known as squab lived in their yellow strawed nest.

The three little pigeons woke up by the bright yellow sun then they stretched their arms wide and then they were hungry so they thinked for a plan and they started screaming loudly, they screamed for hours until it was afternoon. The little pigeons were so hungry that they were about to die, then one pigeon spotted something delicious.

It was a cupcake, so one pigeon went out of its nest and went towards the cupcake, the two pigeons were worried they thought that they will get in trouble by their mum. So the pigeon thought that they should do it fast, so the two pigeons came out of their nest and they went towards the window and they started jumping trying to catch the cupcake.

But they were too small so the youngest pigeon thought for an idea so the the pigeons climbed onto each other's head and then they tried grabbing the cupcake, but then they started to fall, they tried balancing but they fell and one pigeon nearly fell from the roof. Then they said to each other that there is no way to get the cupcake.

Then the pigeons had one more idea left so they used it which was seesaw, so the pigeon got their seesaw and one pigeon went on the other side of the seesaw. The pigeon stood on the edge of it and then the other two pigeons went on the other side and then the one pigeon jumped on the seesaw but the pigeon on the other side didn’t went in the air.

So the last pigeon jumped too and then the pigeon that was on the other side went up, up, up and up in the air but when it came down he forgot to grab the cupcake, the pigeon banged its head on the window and it hurted him. So they all went to their nest and waited for their mum to come home. After two hours their mum came back but she was still flying so she dropped the worm on the nest and went away, the pigeons were sad and waited for mum again to come home.

THE END

Thursday, June 29, 2017

My story about Alma

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing. I hope you like my story about Alma😎.


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Alma

On a snowy, frosty and cold day, the town was big as an elephant and some building were big as a skyscraper, some were covered in snow, some were covered in umbrella and others were covered in salt to keep the snow away from the shop. Any ways my name is Alma, I am a little girl.

I was wearing a hat, jeans, a jacket, hand  gloves and a long scarf. I walked until I found a board that had names written on them. So I looked for a chalk to write my name. It was hard to find it because the chalk was white and also the snow, it was camouflaged.

Finally I found the chalk so I picked it up and wrote my name, Alma. Once I finished writing my name. I took off the scarf off my mouth, then suddenly I heard a rattle and a squeaking voice. I turned around very slowly then I saw nothing behind me making the noise. So I went towards a shop that looked like a shark mouth.

I looked in the shop and saw a something, I cleaned the window because it had snow on it, once it was clear to see, I saw a doll that looked just like me. I was scared and I did not know where it came from or who made it. I took a deep breath in and I was not scared any more.

Now I wanted that doll that looked like me but as soon as I looked back at the doll, it magically disappeared. I looked for it and and I couldn’t find it. So I went by the door and looked there to find it, when I looked very carefully, then something captured my eye, it was the doll, it was on the piano.

I tried opening the door but it didn’t work, so I tried pulling it harder, but it still didn’t open. I was angry and sad so I picked up some snow in my hand, rolled it and threw it at the door. Suddenly the door magically opened.

I was happy, so I quickly ran at the door and slowly opened the door. Once I entered the shop, I knew it was a doll shop. It was full of colourful dolls and lots of them. I looked down and saw that I was walking on cobblestones, I never seen one like this before.

Any ways I was inside then I walked slowly to the doll that looked just like me then suddenly, I stepped on a toy. It was a boy on a tricycle. I picked it up then put it back up then the tricycle moved and went to the door and then it bang itself on the door and the door closed.

I didn’t care about it, I could still open it from the inside. So I turned around and grabbed the doll, before I could grab it, the doll magically disappeared from the piano. I looked for it under the piano and then, something captured my eye.

It was the doll and it was on the shelf, I did not know how it got there but any ways. I climbed the shelf and reached for the doll, and the boy on the tricycle was still banging the door, once I touched it’s nose I was getting sruncked. I felt weird and the scary part was that I was in the doll, I was scared, all I could do was to move my eyes. Then I saw another doll by the window and I knew that same girl will come.

THE END

Friday, June 23, 2017

My story about the girl in red coat

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing. I hope you like my story about the girl in red coat😎.

The girl in red coat.

One day in a spooky thundering night, there was a family that was poor and sad and hungry. In the family was a father that was 34 years old, a mother that was 27 years old and they had a daughter that was 3 years old. The father's name is Jadi and the mother's name was Jani, but they did not named there little baby daughter.

Any ways, the daughters father and mother left their daughter in a cave then the daughters mother and father went back to there homeless house. The next day in the morning the queen of london wanted to go for a walk in her garden, so two of her  servants went with her to keep her safe.

The queen was wearing a beautiful dress, it was coloured white like white snow and it was sparkling like a diamond. The queen walked slowly like a cheetah creeping to someone, once the queen reached her beautiful garden, she started smelling them.

Some smelled like perfume, some smelled like a normal flower and some smelled like honey. Then she heard something that came from behind the bushes, it sounded like a baby crying, so the queen walked slowly to it and then she went into the bushes, once she reached the other side of the bush, she saw a cave.

She peeked behind the cave and saw a little baby girl on a flat rock, she went inside and picked her up slowly, and she looked around that if anyone was around her palace. So she took her inside her palace quickly and put her in a warm blanket, then she got some warm water in the tub then she put the little baby girl in the tub and washed her.

Once the queen finished cleaning the baby girl, she went into her room and told her servants to get some cloths for the baby girl. Once the queen’s servants came with some warm cloths the queen took it from them and dressed her in a pretty pink princess dress.

The queen wanted to make the girls birthday because the queen wanted to. So they started decorating the little girls birthday, once the birthday was finished the queen named her little girl marigold, and she made a red coat and made her wear it, then the queen called her the girl in red coat, that coat was a gift from the queen.


THE END

Friday, June 16, 2017

My story about Giraffes

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing. I hope you like my story about Diving Giraffes and I hope you have a great day😎.

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Diving Giraffes

Once upon a time there were 13 tall, slim giraffes and they were trained by their trainers. They were in a hotel, a hotel for giraffes. The giraffes walked and the first giraffe went to the camera that was watching the giraffes. The giraffe licked the camera and went to the swimming pool. They started walking around and around the tornado staircase then once they reached at the top in a line, one giraffe came down and down on the swing and hung there.

Then one by one, the giraffes hung with them then let go and they did somersaults, backflips, frontflips and other things when they jumped into the pool. Then once they were all finished, all of them went up the staircase, some went in the same floor and some went in different floors, then another giraffe appeared and it was on a swing and it was hanging there.

The giraffes ran and the ones that were on the swing swung them and they all did things that they wanted to do like backflips and stuff, then they jumped into the water or a pool, then once they were finished swimming, they all went out of the pool.

They all kneeled down and drunk the pool water, that was disgusting because some giraffes weed in the pool, but the giraffes didn’t care. The drunk until they heard a noise, it made a thud sound, the giraffes ran like a cheetah and back to their house…

6 hours later,
The two giraffes were on the swing for 6 hours so they just jumped and went to their house.


THE END