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Thursday, August 17, 2017

My story about The catch

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about The Catch and have a great day😎.

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The Catch

One day in a early morning, there was a boy named Parowa he was 11 years old and he was the only child in the village. Everyone in his village wanted him to get a big fish for everyone. But that boy couldn’t, he couldn’t catch one single fish. But his dad told him that if he doesn't, he will be punished.

He picked up his leaf hat, his fishing rod and his basket and went to the lake. Once he reached the lake he was tired, thirsty and hungry, and there was a problem, the lake was drying and the fishes were gone. But not all of them, they were little ones, so he swung my fishing rod and threw the rods string in the lake.

He felt a pull so he pulled as hard as he could and a little fish came out and then landed on the ground. He picked it up and then dropped it in the basket. He was sad so he didn’t mind, he knew that there will be more big fish.

Then suddenly he heard a scream behind the bushes, so he creeped towards the bush and looked behind the bushes. It was a fox stuck by a vine around one of its legs, He picked up his knife and cut the vine in half. The fox turned around and then he pounced at the boy, he fell down and the fox climbed on his chest and made a angry looking face.

Then the fox smelled something, the fox ran to his basket and sat down, The boy was looking at his face and the smiled at him and took the fish from the boys basket. The fox ran and under the thorn bush, the boy tried catching the fox so he went under the thorn bush, once he was on the other side of the thorn bush he saw the fox and tried catching it.

The fox went up the big hill and the boy was scared, so he tried his best and then the fox made it on the top of the hill and ran. The boy climbed until his favourite fell down, he was angry because of that fox so he started climbing faster.

Once he reached the top of the hill he saw fogs and couldn’t see the fox anywhere until the fogs were gone and could see the fox now. He was sitting by a big ocean. The boy was amazed, then the fox threw the fish in the ocean and it swimmed away.

Parowa was happy with the fox now so he started fishing here and then a big fish jumped so he caught it with his big fishing rod and he got a almost little fish and gave it to the fox. Then the boy went home to have fish for dinner. Then the fox started thinking about how kind he was and that wasn’t the fox, it was the god.

THE END

1 comment:

  1. Great Job Ranit!,
    This is Elisha Mae, I really like your story about "The catch", I like the way you write the story and put some interesting word like "creeped", but next time you could add ore detail about what your post about, what challenge you and above all what you have learned about this writing task, but anyway you did a really cool writing.

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