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Friday, December 1, 2017

Selfie Cat Writing

This week we have been watching a video about Selfie Cat, we had to watch the video very carefully and write a amazing piece of writing about it. I made a long story about it and I hope you like it, and have a great day😎👍.

W.A.L.T: Use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language features to describe the setting and what is happening.

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Selfie Cat

One Sunny bright day, I was in my mansion that was on the edge of the hill, by the beach. The sun was shining bright in my sitting room and my couch that I was sitting on, the cat was lazy and sleeping in her bed couch. My name is Rover, I am 16 years old, I was checking the  instacat because to see who is in the first place that has the cutest picture of their cats. Then a note came up, it said that I was in the first place that has the cutest pictures of the cats.

“Woohoo!!!.” I shouted in an excitement, I started commenting to people and their pictures. Then I heard my fat cat yawning, you know why she is fat because everytime when I take picture of her and me I give her treats as much as she wants. But she eats a lot and all the time, then a new notification came up, it said that, “Noooooo, she is in first place.” I shouted in a angry voice.

I was red as a fresh tomato that my head was about to blow up, I quickly found my cat trying to struggle getting into her small toilet. I pulled her out, anyways her name is Alpha. She is a very fat cat that’s why she is struggling to get in, so I pulled her out of there and force her to take a picture with me.

Then she tried to scratch my face but it was too close, next she tried to poke my beautiful brown eye. Next I picked up my tablet and tried to take a photo with my cat, then she tried to kick my face. Then I it took a photo, it was not a very good photo. “Ouchhie.” I said in a horrified voice. My cat pulled me off my couch and I fell on the floor hard, next my cat tried to run but I caught her just in time.

“MEOW.” My cat said in a rage voice. I was in a rage mode too and I went to get my phone, and grabbed my cat. Grabbed my phone and took a photo. Suddenly my cat betrayed me, she bit my hand and it was bleeding very bad. “Ahhhh.” I said in a sorrowful voice. Then she tried to run away from me again, I grabbed her tail and picked my phone up and picked Alpha up.

Next suddenly she grabbed the piano with her razor sharp claws, I pulled her tail very hard like I was a bulldozer. Then I falsely let go of her tail and I sling shot her into the black piano, next I went to get her but she made an angry growl at me, I was so frightened. I slowly went towards the piano, closer and closer and closer and, “MEEEEOOOOWWWW.” as she leapfrogged at me.

My heart was beating faster and faster like a race car going 100 miles per hour, I my cats mouthy was wide open like she was about to chop my hand. When I fell my phone slip from my hand took a photo, next my cat published it by walking over it and went to its toilet to pee. I was so sad, suddenly after that, I was getting lots of likes because people thought that the cat was trying to pounce on me and give me a hug.

I was happy and thanks to my cat he will get lots of treat for that photo….

Maybe that's how she got fat, I fed her too much, hahahahahahahaha.

THE END

1 comment:

  1. Hi ranit it is me Odin I loved your story it looked like you put a lot of effort in to the story you made me feel like I was really there great job keep up the good work

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