Ranit's Space Story

W.A.L.T: Write a narrative

IO's first space trip

I was so excited that I had landed on earth, but something was missing. Humans ,not on earth but dead and no one alive.

I cried for one hour, but when I stopped crying, something moved. Everything moved all around me, it was the chimps, evil chimps, all kinds of monkeys were on earth, but I don’t know why. One Chimp came towards me and Said” Who are you and why are you on our planet? “Your planet!” I replied to the Chimp.

The Chimp said “Yes, my planet.”

I said to him “woh woh woh”. This is my planet and I came to save life on this earth not to lose it!!!!”. Then I started dreaming of the older days. “When I was little, I helped people, I took care of some people but, but you monkeys you destroy things, break things.”

“You know why we destroyed your planet” said the Chimp leader. “We destroyed your planet because (sniffs sadly) because your humans destroyed our forest. Not just our forest, our home, our family and now we monkeys have nothing” said the Chimp leader.

“What should we do with this chimp? said the gorilla.

“We should kill him” said the Chimp leader.

I ran into the hospital because there was so many big places to hide. I ran as fast as I could. I saw all kinds of monkeys were following me towards the hospital. When I got inside the hospital, in the middle of the floor there was a door. I opened the door, went in it, then locked it. The monkeys came after me.

The Chimp leader said, “Search everywhere for that stupid Space Chimp!”.

There were stars under ground, I went down, down, and down until I saw a light. I was surprised, there were some same chimps as me and there were living underground for safety. I said, “Hello family Chimps, my name is IO what's your name?.” They did not say anything to me, so when I was going to look around, the Chimp said so silently, “Son”. I was surprised that I was back with my family, but then I started thinking that Mac took me away from my Chimp family and made me the world's first great chimp. “But why did Mac choose me”? I didn’t know the answer yet so just forgot about it. I asked them questions about the monkeys.

The underground Chimp told me that they just came and just destroyed the our home and they used gorillas as they guarded and the gorillas killed all the humans, except us two.

Soon I knew that the Chimp leader was lying to me. Soon I got mad,very mad that I started making some special armor that can keep me safe and some potions that can make me bigger and stronger like in the Jungle Book when King louie lives in the monkey temple. I was ready to come out of the floor but then, I saw all the monkeys were behind me. I slowly came out of the floor then headed to the door outside quietly. I ran into the forest then the monkeys saw me and they were now following me. I climbed up a tree and I shut my mouth and silence. The monkeys came into the forest and started searching for me, Suddenly one monkey climbed a tree that I was on. I took out my invisible potion and dropped a tiny small invisible potion on me then, KABOOM, I was invisible then the monkey reached the top of the tree then it went down. “That was close”I said, then I saw a gorilla taking a little boy to the Chimp leader.

The Chimp leader said, “come out you famous space Chimp, come and save the boy”,

I didn’t say anything and I stayed silent. The boy was so scared that the monkeys would kill him and I was thinking the same. The leader monkey took the boy to a secret place called Hopone. Hopone, I said to myself, then I started following and they couldn’t see me following them because I put invisible potion on me. Once we reached there it was huge and very wide and a very big door, and inside was very smelly dead rats and a dusty old house. It was same as hospital, and it had the door that was on the floor. They went in it and I waited for 40 seconds, then I went in it. When I went in it, Suddenly my invisible potion was no longer working!!!!.  The  monkeys heard me behind them and I started running upstairs, but the gorilla blocked the ladder and the leader chimp said, “Take him to the burning house and tie him up with the rope that can bend but can’t break”. When I got to the burning house I felt hot and so sweaty that it was hot as a burning pan on a stove, and I heard crying beside me. It was the same boy that I saw with the Chimp leader. “What’s your name?” I said to the boy. “My name is Chloe, Mac’s son” said the boy. I was surprised that my trainer had a son. That made me so mad, and do you know why I got mad? Because if anyone touches or kidnaps my trainer's son or anyone in my trainer’s family, I get so mad that's why!!!!. I cut the rope with the cutting potion and and put on karate potion then I could do all the Karate, yahoo!!!!. I cut Chloe’s rope too and I told him “stay behind me and I’ll protect you”. So he did as I say. Then suddenly one big gorilla jumped in front of me then, Karate time, one punch in the tummy, one punch in the head and one punch in the face. Boom, he's dead. When the gorilla was dead 10 more monkeys came to fight, so Karate again. All the monkeys were dead but the Chimp leader was missing so I went to find him. I saw one chimp went to a house so I picked up a sword and went to the house. Will I survive or will the Chimp leader? Don, don, don.

The End