My story about the girl in red coat

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing. I hope you like my story about the girl in red coat😎.

The girl in red coat.

One day in a spooky thundering night, there was a family that was poor and sad and hungry. In the family was a father that was 34 years old, a mother that was 27 years old and they had a daughter that was 3 years old. The father's name is Jadi and the mother's name was Jani, but they did not named there little baby daughter.

Any ways, the daughters father and mother left their daughter in a cave then the daughters mother and father went back to there homeless house. The next day in the morning the queen of london wanted to go for a walk in her garden, so two of her  servants went with her to keep her safe.

The queen was wearing a beautiful dress, it was coloured white like white snow and it was sparkling like a diamond. The queen walked slowly like a cheetah creeping to someone, once the queen reached her beautiful garden, she started smelling them.

Some smelled like perfume, some smelled like a normal flower and some smelled like honey. Then she heard something that came from behind the bushes, it sounded like a baby crying, so the queen walked slowly to it and then she went into the bushes, once she reached the other side of the bush, she saw a cave.

She peeked behind the cave and saw a little baby girl on a flat rock, she went inside and picked her up slowly, and she looked around that if anyone was around her palace. So she took her inside her palace quickly and put her in a warm blanket, then she got some warm water in the tub then she put the little baby girl in the tub and washed her.

Once the queen finished cleaning the baby girl, she went into her room and told her servants to get some cloths for the baby girl. Once the queen’s servants came with some warm cloths the queen took it from them and dressed her in a pretty pink princess dress.

The queen wanted to make the girls birthday because the queen wanted to. So they started decorating the little girls birthday, once the birthday was finished the queen named her little girl marigold, and she made a red coat and made her wear it, then the queen called her the girl in red coat, that coat was a gift from the queen.

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