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Thursday, August 3, 2017

My story about Big Bird Problem

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing. I hope you like my story about Big Bird Problem and have a great day😎.

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The big Bird Problem


Once upon a time, in the early morning, the sun raised in the clear sky, it shone like a diamond, the clouds moved away from the sun. A little bird named Snob was alone because he wanted peace and quiet. He sat on a wire and just rested its wings and relaxed in the sun. Snob liked the sun because it warmed its features and the features made him warm, he wanted to stay here forever.


Until a little bird named Sky came by and wanted to rest its wings too, her wings were sweaty like she was melting like snow, her head turned red like she was about to fall to the ground, so she rested on the wire too.Snob turned red like a red tomato, he didn’t want her near him so he told Sky to go away from him. Then suddenly more birds came, they started arguing because they wanted to stay alone by themselves, but they said no because they wanted to stay on the wire that the other birds were standing on.


They argued until they all the little birds heard a noise, even Snob and Sky. They all looked to the side of the wire and there stood a big blue bird with a long yellow beak. “Hello there” big bird said nicely. All the little birds started laughing. “I think that flightless bird is trying to make friends with us” Snob said while laughing.


The big bird didn’t cry and he wasn’t sad, he just smiled because he really wanted a friend to hang out with. So he was a friendly one, so he said hello again, the birds went away from the big bird because they did not want to be his friend, so the little birds started speaking to each other about the big bird.


“I think the big bird is flightless and we are not flightless so he can’t be our friend, he is heavy too.” Snob said quietly to Sky. Sky disagree to Snob because everyone is different, Snob still agree that he is no match for us little birds. Then the big bird came and sat with them on the electric wire. Sky went away and sat where the big bird sat in the first place and watched them.


Suddenly the wire went down because there were too many birds sitting on one wire, but not Sky. The wire went all the way down touching the road, then it went a little up and it stopped. The birds didn’t know that  because they didn’t like looking at his face, Snob was angry that it made him peck the big bird with its sharp little beak.


Then suddenly, Snob and the other little bird had an idea, next Snob and the other bird started pecking the big bird’s feet with its sharp beak. The other birds started cheering the two birds that was pecking the big bird but Sky didn’t. Then one bird realized that we were near at the ground. Then that bird told the other birds that we were close to the ground, after that  they all looked down.


“Stop pecking  bird’s feet, we are close to the ground.” little bird said loudly. Then the big bird landed on the ground softly and the little birds got shot in the air leaving their features behind. But Sky did not because she was watching them. Then the little birds came down and onto the ground, they had a bad landing.


The big bird started laughing and offered the little bird a feature, because he was naked. All of them were so they ran away and Sky watched them ran and she started laughing. The big bird went away to find friends and then Sky came, she asked the big bird that can she be his friend and the big bird accepted, after that the two birds went away together making more new friends.

THE END

2 comments:

  1. awesome story ranit I loved your story keep up the good work

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