My writing about Buster the Boxer

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing.I hope you like my story.

Here is the video Buster the Boxer

Buster the Boxer

It was Christmas eve, the sun went down, the sky was navy blue and black, the stars were shining and twinkling like a diamond. The lights turned by the streets and everyone was fast asleep, waiting for the Christmas to start tomorrow.

“Anyway my name is Buster the dog, I was watching my friend jumping on the bed in the room, then her mum came in the room and said, “Calm down and get some rest”. Then her mum kissed her forehead then looked out the window and watched her daddy building the trampoline for her little girl. Once his dad was done, he came in and started to get warmed up.

Then I was out of my friends room and went into the sitting room to look at the trampoline. My friends dad came and sat on the chair with his wife and watched a movie. I didn’t watched a movie because I had a dream that my friend had, which is jumping on the trampoline. Then than bushes started moving and out came two foxes and they looked at the trampoline.

The two foxes jumped onto the trampoline and then one fox jumped once, next the fox looked at the other fox, then they both started jumping on the trampoline like a frog. They jumped until they saw something coming towards them. It had black and white stripes like a zebra, and once that zebra looking thing jumped onto the trampoline, the fox knew it was a badger, his friend. After that the foxes started jumping again with the badger.

I felt sad and I really wanted to play on the trampoline. I saw a squirrel and a hedgehog jumping on the trampoline. I really wanted to jump with them so I went to sleep in the cozy dog house that was inside my friends house.

IN THE MORNING

In the morning the sun was out and it shined like a gold and the birds started twitting. I woke up and also my friend. She raced down the stairs and out the door then I did the same thing, then I leaped into the trampoline then I started jumping on the trampoline like a frog. My friend looked at me, her parents and also the people walking by the pathway. I barked so loud because it was fun and it was the best day ever.

THE END

MY STORY ABOUT ADVENTURES ARE THE PITS

ADVENTURES ARE THE PITS

In the morning, my mum was taking me to the cafe where you drink yummy hot chocolate, milk shakes and others. Beside the cafe was an adventure play land. I didn’t want to go there, I wanted to go with my mum in the cafe to have some hot chocolate, and another reason was that I was scared and didn’t want to play in the  adventure play land, but my mum said that I to get rid of my fears and give it a go. So once we arrived at the cafe, my mum left me at the adventure play land and went to the cafe to have some coffee or tea and something to eat, so I went up the ladder and played on the trampoline, monkey bars and others, but not the ball pit.

After playing everything else I was bored like a lion that has nothing to do, I looked at the pit and the two orange slide,. I went to the slide and looked down at the pit. Today was the day to get rid of my fears, just like what my mum said by the pathway. I put my hands on the slide  and took a deep breath in like a dragon about to breath fire. My hands started shaking, my legs started wobbling and my face turned red as a red hot stove. I pulled myself into the slide and started screaming like I was riding a roller coaster.

I screamed louder than before, I was out of the slide and then went into the colourful ball pit, the balls flew in the air and spread everywhere. I went  deeper and deeper in the ball pit like it was deep as Bermuda triangle or Mariana trench, I was still screaming. Then I slid down the ball tower and landed on the bottom of the pit. I stood up and I saw a rainbow coloured lollipop stuck on my face, I tried getting it off then SMACK.

The lollipop came off and it was sticky like a glue, I turned around and looked up. It was a ball of tower and there was an exit, I slowly went backwards then I looked behind me and saw a hole that was huge and it looked like a black hole and it looked like the end of the world. I quickly hanged on to the tower then I thought that I should climb up the tower, and that's what I just did. I climbed and climbed, then I jumped onto the other side then I nearly fell down. I climbed until I saw a bandage, It slowly fell down and on my nose. I tried getting it off the I let go of the tower and got the bandage off. I nearly fell down but quickly I grabbed onto the lollipop. I Thought that I could use the lollipop as a hook so I could climb up the ball tower, and that’s what I just did and I finally made it. I was so proud then I ate the sticky purple lollipop then threw balls in the air. Then we went home.

THE END