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Friday, July 28, 2017

My story about Presistent Pigeon

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing. I hope you like my story about Presistent Pigeon😎.

Presistent Pigeon

Once upon a time, it was an early morning, the shone shone bright in the sky like gold. There was not a cloud in the sky and the sky colour was fresh blue like a fresh sea or ocean, on the rooftop of the hotel lived three little baby pigeons also known as squab lived in their yellow strawed nest.

The three little pigeons woke up by the bright yellow sun then they stretched their arms wide and then they were hungry so they thinked for a plan and they started screaming loudly, they screamed for hours until it was afternoon. The little pigeons were so hungry that they were about to die, then one pigeon spotted something delicious.

It was a cupcake, so one pigeon went out of its nest and went towards the cupcake, the two pigeons were worried they thought that they will get in trouble by their mum. So the pigeon thought that they should do it fast, so the two pigeons came out of their nest and they went towards the window and they started jumping trying to catch the cupcake.

But they were too small so the youngest pigeon thought for an idea so the the pigeons climbed onto each other's head and then they tried grabbing the cupcake, but then they started to fall, they tried balancing but they fell and one pigeon nearly fell from the roof. Then they said to each other that there is no way to get the cupcake.

Then the pigeons had one more idea left so they used it which was seesaw, so the pigeon got their seesaw and one pigeon went on the other side of the seesaw. The pigeon stood on the edge of it and then the other two pigeons went on the other side and then the one pigeon jumped on the seesaw but the pigeon on the other side didn’t went in the air.

So the last pigeon jumped too and then the pigeon that was on the other side went up, up, up and up in the air but when it came down he forgot to grab the cupcake, the pigeon banged its head on the window and it hurted him. So they all went to their nest and waited for their mum to come home. After two hours their mum came back but she was still flying so she dropped the worm on the nest and went away, the pigeons were sad and waited for mum again to come home.

THE END

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