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Diving Giraffes
Once upon a time there were 13 tall, slim giraffes and they were trained by their trainers. They were in a hotel, a hotel for giraffes. The giraffes walked and the first giraffe went to the camera that was watching the giraffes. The giraffe licked the camera and went to the swimming pool. They started walking around and around the tornado staircase then once they reached at the top in a line, one giraffe came down and down on the swing and hung there.
Then one by one, the giraffes hung with them then let go and they did somersaults, backflips, frontflips and other things when they jumped into the pool. Then once they were all finished, all of them went up the staircase, some went in the same floor and some went in different floors, then another giraffe appeared and it was on a swing and it was hanging there.
The giraffes ran and the ones that were on the swing swung them and they all did things that they wanted to do like backflips and stuff, then they jumped into the water or a pool, then once they were finished swimming, they all went out of the pool.
They all kneeled down and drunk the pool water, that was disgusting because some giraffes weed in the pool, but the giraffes didn’t care. The drunk until they heard a noise, it made a thud sound, the giraffes ran like a cheetah and back to their house…
6 hours later,
The two giraffes were on the swing for 6 hours so they just jumped and went to their house.
THE END
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