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Thursday, August 10, 2017

The Dogs life

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about Big Bird Problem and have a great day😎.

Here is the picture we had to look at and write a story about it.

The Dog’s life

Once upon a time, the cloud raised in the fresh clear blue sky. The sun shined bright just like diamond, crystal, ruby, emerald and gold. The sun's red spark around the sun was coloured like a bright red tomato. The wind was nice and warm, the sand was warm and soft like a cat’s fur.

A light yellowish coloured pug was running along the beach by sprinting and the owner was resting on his chair and drinking lemonade, the owner of the pug was enjoying the sun and his yummy home made lemonade, he took a long sip of the lemonade and ahhhh!!!.

The pug was enjoying so much that he wasn’t even looking, he hit his owner then the pug got sad that what he did to his owner so he ran away from his owner. The owner was so angry that he turned red as a tomato, so he got up on his legs and started looking for his dog to punish him.

The owner looked and looked no matter how hard he tried, he couldn’t find his dog, the owner was sad, his face turned upside down and quickly got all the stuff he had brought to the beach and ran to his car. He named his pink car, it’s name is Speedy the toyota supra car, he put all his stuff in the car and he zoomed home to call the pet control.

4 hours later

The pug was walking down the street looking for its favourite food, chocolate cupcake, he walked down the street until suddenly. The pug’s legs were tired, its legs started shaking like an earthquake, the pug was about to fall to the ground that it was about to die, the pug tried to stand up but he fell. The pug was sad until he smelled something delicious, he stood up straight and followed the smell.

The pug followed the smell until it stopped by a bench, he saw something yummy, something that he likes the most, he’s favourite food that was sitting on the bench, a chocolate cupcake, his face turned into a happy face. Hr raced to the bench to eat the chocolate cupcake, until suddenly. A seagull came and picked up the cupcake with it’s sharp nails and went away to eat it somewhere else.

The pug stopped, and looked up, the pug got sad again, he howled and howled until, a blue van with white stripes came by and picked the pug up and put it in a cage and in the van. The dog was sad because he knew it was the pet control van, the van quickly zoomed all the way to the pet control centre. Once they arrived at the pet control centre the two pet keepers went to the back of the van, opened the door and grabbed the cage that the pug was in and took it at the vet.

Once they arrived at the vet they checked the put if it was okay, then they went back to their pet control centre and waited for its owner to come and pick it’s pug up and take it home. Once the pugs owner arrived at the pet control centre the owner was happy to see its pug okay, the owner thanked them then took the pug home in its car Speedy.

Once they arrived home the pug was hungry and asked for food by making a cute puppy sound, and the owner had made him a special treat for its pug, 20 chocolate cupcakes. That made the pug happy that he jumped onto its owner and started licking him on the face, and both of them watched a movie together. The owner was happy that he got his pug back and the pug is happy that he is home with his owner.

THE END

2 comments:

  1. Well done Ranit! I like you writing it's really cool and I like how you used metaphors on you writing, it's really nice😄. Keep it up!.

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  2. well done Raniti I like your writing i is really interrensting but maybe next time make your story a we bit shorter because I got board reading that.

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