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Friday, May 6, 2016

Battle of Kruger National Park Sequence.

W.A.L.T: Recall Events in Order.


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The herd of buffalo are walking along the river bank.
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A pride of  lions are resting in the sun.
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The pride of lions are ready to catch the baby buffalo for their dinner.
The pride of lions came and chasing the buffalo.
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The lions chased a cute baby buffalo.
The lions made the baby buffalo go into the water until the crocodile came for his dinner.
The herd of buffalos surrounded the lions.
The buffalos kicked and punched the lions.
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The baby Buffalo is rescued by the herd of buffalo.

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  3. I like the way you have sequenced your thoughts Ranit. Can you use the same tense throughout your writing?

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  4. Thanks for a lovely comment Mr Roberts. Yes I'll use the same tense.

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  5. Hi Ranit, Your Battle at Kruger National Park is keally awesome. Next time if you do this put some more facts. Anyway Great job.

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  6. Hi Ranit, Your Battle at Kruger National Park is keally awesome. Next time if you do this put some more facts. Anyway Great job.

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