My writing about Adrift

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing.I hope you like my story about Adrift and I hope you have a great day😎.

Here is a video Adrift

                                                       ADRIFT

Once upon a time I was looking at the clear blue that was coloured like a fresh blue clear spa pool, the sun shined so bright like a hot stove and the clouds were soft like a pinkish purple cotton candy. The air smelled fresh as a fresh fruit drink. Anyway, my name is Layla, I am a little girl, I had red hair and blue clothe. I was on a whale that was coloured blue as a fresh blue sea and ocean. It was big, huge, humongous and super anormase, this is a whale that liked me and liked taking me on an adventure. My house was on top of it because I wanted to make one on a whale and there was grass on the back of the whale so I grew a tree on top of it, a apple tree. My house was rusty and it looked like a witch house, I had to repair my house but I don’t have time.

All I do is watch me and the whale flying in the sky, then something zoomed past me, I raced outside to see what was it and where it went. I went outside then searched for it. Next I saw a lighthouse that had a land flying just like me and the whale, I saw something flying towards us, when it came closer I saw a boy and a bird flying and landed on my whale. He fell down with a thud sound, I helped him get up then the wind started blowing like the wind had hands and tried to pick me up and drop me down in the sea. The sun disappeared in the grey thundering clouds, The boy looked at me then flew away and went to it’s lighthouse by it’s bird wings that he made.

I was sad and lonely and no one to talk to. I went inside the house and stood by the door, then I saw a hook on my whale. I raced outside and looked where it came from, it was the boy again, he needed help. He’s lighthouse was blowing away from the whale  so I quickly grabbed the rope and tied it around the tree I grew. The whale pulled the island that had a lighthouse on it. The boys plan worked, the wind stopped blowing and the clouds were gone, all there was in the sky were blue sky and a bright yellow sun. Then me, my whale, my friend and his lighthouse sat off and waited for our next adventure.

THE END

My writing about Buster the Boxer

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing.I hope you like my story.

Here is the video Buster the Boxer

Buster the Boxer

It was Christmas eve, the sun went down, the sky was navy blue and black, the stars were shining and twinkling like a diamond. The lights turned by the streets and everyone was fast asleep, waiting for the Christmas to start tomorrow.

“Anyway my name is Buster the dog, I was watching my friend jumping on the bed in the room, then her mum came in the room and said, “Calm down and get some rest”. Then her mum kissed her forehead then looked out the window and watched her daddy building the trampoline for her little girl. Once his dad was done, he came in and started to get warmed up.

Then I was out of my friends room and went into the sitting room to look at the trampoline. My friends dad came and sat on the chair with his wife and watched a movie. I didn’t watched a movie because I had a dream that my friend had, which is jumping on the trampoline. Then than bushes started moving and out came two foxes and they looked at the trampoline.

The two foxes jumped onto the trampoline and then one fox jumped once, next the fox looked at the other fox, then they both started jumping on the trampoline like a frog. They jumped until they saw something coming towards them. It had black and white stripes like a zebra, and once that zebra looking thing jumped onto the trampoline, the fox knew it was a badger, his friend. After that the foxes started jumping again with the badger.

I felt sad and I really wanted to play on the trampoline. I saw a squirrel and a hedgehog jumping on the trampoline. I really wanted to jump with them so I went to sleep in the cozy dog house that was inside my friends house.

IN THE MORNING

In the morning the sun was out and it shined like a gold and the birds started twitting. I woke up and also my friend. She raced down the stairs and out the door then I did the same thing, then I leaped into the trampoline then I started jumping on the trampoline like a frog. My friend looked at me, her parents and also the people walking by the pathway. I barked so loud because it was fun and it was the best day ever.

THE END

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This is my Story about Somalia

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing.I hope you like my story about Somalia and I hope you have a great day😎.

Somalia

It was early morning and the sun was rising in the clear blue sea coloured sky and the ocean sparkled like a diamond. I was having a nice warm coffee, I was looking at everyone having some rest and eating things to get there energy again to work hard. Any way, my name is captain Vincent, leader of this cargo ship and my crew, I wear a captain’s hat that's white and black, and a shirt and a pants that’s white and black too, I don’t boss around and tell people what to do, I tell them nicely and I respect them. I watched the people resting until I heard a noise.

The two little boats were heading towards our big boat like a megalodon charging at us which is a cargo ship. Once they got near our boat, one of our crew saw pirates and they picked up a hook and started climbing it, the pirates picked up their guns and started taking over the ship.

Some pirates went into the kitchen and started eating soup, carrots, chicken and more because they were very hungry. They went up the steps until they reached my control room. I didn’t even felt scared but my crew was. I knew that they made a big mistake and I knew what’s gonna happen to them. The captain of the pirates came and said that to give him the keys so I did.

Then some of his pirates went to get some stuff from the ship that was in the container, but when they opened it, it was empty. The pirates were angry, then the containers lid started opening. I watched them and I saw that the pirates were worried.

The vestel robot’s came out from the containers and started scaring the pirates away. All the robot’s worked together to get the pirates in one place. My crew were happy and cheering for the robot’s. The pirates were screaming like girl, then once they got them in one place, one robot which was the leader of all the robot’s went into the control room and taped on the leader pirates shoulder. The pirate leader was scared then the robot showed him the robot’s and his crew. He was shocked and wanted to go into their little boats again. The robot gave me the hat and the key, then said goodbye to me. I was happy and so as my crew. Next I went back to my control room and had more coffee.

THE END

MY STORY ABOUT ADVENTURES ARE THE PITS

ADVENTURES ARE THE PITS

In the morning, my mum was taking me to the cafe where you drink yummy hot chocolate, milk shakes and others. Beside the cafe was an adventure play land. I didn’t want to go there, I wanted to go with my mum in the cafe to have some hot chocolate, and another reason was that I was scared and didn’t want to play in the  adventure play land, but my mum said that I to get rid of my fears and give it a go. So once we arrived at the cafe, my mum left me at the adventure play land and went to the cafe to have some coffee or tea and something to eat, so I went up the ladder and played on the trampoline, monkey bars and others, but not the ball pit.

After playing everything else I was bored like a lion that has nothing to do, I looked at the pit and the two orange slide,. I went to the slide and looked down at the pit. Today was the day to get rid of my fears, just like what my mum said by the pathway. I put my hands on the slide  and took a deep breath in like a dragon about to breath fire. My hands started shaking, my legs started wobbling and my face turned red as a red hot stove. I pulled myself into the slide and started screaming like I was riding a roller coaster.

I screamed louder than before, I was out of the slide and then went into the colourful ball pit, the balls flew in the air and spread everywhere. I went  deeper and deeper in the ball pit like it was deep as Bermuda triangle or Mariana trench, I was still screaming. Then I slid down the ball tower and landed on the bottom of the pit. I stood up and I saw a rainbow coloured lollipop stuck on my face, I tried getting it off then SMACK.

The lollipop came off and it was sticky like a glue, I turned around and looked up. It was a ball of tower and there was an exit, I slowly went backwards then I looked behind me and saw a hole that was huge and it looked like a black hole and it looked like the end of the world. I quickly hanged on to the tower then I thought that I should climb up the tower, and that's what I just did. I climbed and climbed, then I jumped onto the other side then I nearly fell down. I climbed until I saw a bandage, It slowly fell down and on my nose. I tried getting it off the I let go of the tower and got the bandage off. I nearly fell down but quickly I grabbed onto the lollipop. I Thought that I could use the lollipop as a hook so I could climb up the ball tower, and that’s what I just did and I finally made it. I was so proud then I ate the sticky purple lollipop then threw balls in the air. Then we went home.

THE END

My Writing

Beyond the Lines

Once upon a time, me and my brother were playing hide and seek. I was the oldest in my family, so any ways I hid in the loef and my brother was still counting I was finding a place to hide somewhere in the loef then Is saw a chest that had a key in the key locker. I turned the key around then the chest opened. I looked inside and saw a soldier hat and a letter. I called my brother and my grandad and grandma.

Once everyone came I asked my grandad what was this, he said to me that it was a long story he said to me. He said that he was a soldier and he was fighting the turkish people. Next He started telling us the story and me and my brother thought that we were there. Our grandad said that it took them 2 months to get to gallipoli. It was NZ,UK and Australia going to fight the turkish people, so once he and his soldiers arrived then they opened the boat’s hatch door.

Then his soldiers got out of the boat and he said to us that he was very scared and did not know what to do. So all his grandad did was join the fight with his other soldiers, he saw his soldiers on the ground,  dead. We saw it too by imagining. We felt like we were there in real life, we looked for our grandad in the war but we couldn’t find him. We raced out of the boat and searched for him but we couldn’t.

The soldiers were keeping us safe but one by one they got shot by the turkish people that were shooting from the top of the hill. We ran as fast as we could then a bomb landed behind us and we flew in the air then landed safely on the ground. We hid behind a metal shed, we looked for our grandad, after that we saw him hiding behind another metal shed and scared.

We ran as fast as we could to him and once we made it, we smiled at him. Then the turkish people nearly shot us and our grandad. Then our grandad found his friend shot by bullets, he felt sad then his friend died. Then he saw one of his other friend shot in the face, he felt scared and he had only one way, to reach the top of the hill and shoot everyone. Once he was out of his shed the turkish people started shooting him.

We flew in the air then landed in a hole very hard, it hurt us really bad. People were helping us but they kept dying. Me and my brother hugged each other then our grandad came and hugged us. It was a horrible dream we had, we started crying then we stopped. Our grandma came and saw everything. My grandad picked up my little brother and walked out of the loef.

We waited for our grandma, then she picked up the hat the dropped it in the box, then locked it. Our grandad is lucky that he survived in the war. So once our grandma was done she came and closed the door. And that was the end of his story.

THE END  

My Writing about The Cloud

This is my story about The Cloud, before we started writing we had to watch the video carefully then think about how you would feel. Then once we started writing we started adding punctuation, juicy words and make sure the sentence make sense. Once we had finished our story we had to post it on our blog, I hope you like my story about The Cloud and I hope you have a great day😎.

The Cloud

Once upon a time, there was a cloud that was not like any other clouds, other clouds work together to make big storms and destroy homes and make floods. But this cloud was kind and helpful. He was fluffy, white as a snow, grey as a bright grey moon, he looked like a cotton candy, soft, clever, friendly, brave, strong and special. He liked travelling around the world and helping them. One day in the early morning the clouds moved to a city called New York City, and that kind cloud went to the city without the other unkind clouds, this cloud came from the sea and it wanted to save New York City if they needed him, so he started looking around for the people that needed him.

When the cloud went into the city he thought that it was beautiful and everyone was safe, he went over the cooling system and it blew him up and the cloud thought that it was fun. All the people thought that he was dangerous, so some people keep their things inside until the cloud goes away, he was lost by travelling around so he went to see himself in the tower. He felt sad and lonely that he came far from the other clouds so he went back, but when he was the clouds were gone and left him in the city.

He got sad until he knew what to do in the city, he thought that he should have fun in the city, so he went to the town. Once he reached at the town he thought that what should he do first to have some fun with other people, so he had an idea, he blocked the traffic light and he the cloud was glowing, everyone in the town thought he was dangerous, the cloud felt even more sad that no one needs me and they were looking at him because they thought that he was a dump cloud. So the cloud went somewhere that no people have been, the cloud went to a car park that was rusty and closed for years, then the cloud wanted to see what was inside the dark rusty car park. But when he turned on his lightning on for some light to see, a German Shepherd dog barked so loud at him that he got a fright.

He went past a tower and the people in the office were scared of the cloud so he went away then he heard a siren somewhere so he followed the sound. Once he reached there he saw fire and some firefighters fighting the fire, he thought that it was a hard job for them so he made a thunder sound and it started raining the fire looked like it had hands and and it wanted to grab me and destroy me. Everyone was pleased and lucky that there was a friendly cloud. Just in time, the fire was out he thought that no one needed help anymore so he went back to the clouds. Everyone was safe in New York City and the people thought that he was smart even he was small, cute and furry and everyone was happy.