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Thursday, May 18, 2017

My writing about Buster the Boxer

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing.I hope you like my story.

Here is the video Buster the Boxer

Buster the Boxer

It was Christmas eve, the sun went down, the sky was navy blue and black, the stars were shining and twinkling like a diamond. The lights turned by the streets and everyone was fast asleep, waiting for the Christmas to start tomorrow.

“Anyway my name is Buster the dog, I was watching my friend jumping on the bed in the room, then her mum came in the room and said, “Calm down and get some rest”. Then her mum kissed her forehead then looked out the window and watched her daddy building the trampoline for her little girl. Once his dad was done, he came in and started to get warmed up.

Then I was out of my friends room and went into the sitting room to look at the trampoline. My friends dad came and sat on the chair with his wife and watched a movie. I didn’t watched a movie because I had a dream that my friend had, which is jumping on the trampoline. Then than bushes started moving and out came two foxes and they looked at the trampoline.

The two foxes jumped onto the trampoline and then one fox jumped once, next the fox looked at the other fox, then they both started jumping on the trampoline like a frog. They jumped until they saw something coming towards them. It had black and white stripes like a zebra, and once that zebra looking thing jumped onto the trampoline, the fox knew it was a badger, his friend. After that the foxes started jumping again with the badger.

I felt sad and I really wanted to play on the trampoline. I saw a squirrel and a hedgehog jumping on the trampoline. I really wanted to jump with them so I went to sleep in the cozy dog house that was inside my friends house.

IN THE MORNING

In the morning the sun was out and it shined like a gold and the birds started twitting. I woke up and also my friend. She raced down the stairs and out the door then I did the same thing, then I leaped into the trampoline then I started jumping on the trampoline like a frog. My friend looked at me, her parents and also the people walking by the pathway. I barked so loud because it was fun and it was the best day ever.



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