My writing about Adrift

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing.I hope you like my story about Adrift and I hope you have a great day😎.

Here is a video Adrift

                                                       ADRIFT

Once upon a time I was looking at the clear blue that was coloured like a fresh blue clear spa pool, the sun shined so bright like a hot stove and the clouds were soft like a pinkish purple cotton candy. The air smelled fresh as a fresh fruit drink. Anyway, my name is Layla, I am a little girl, I had red hair and blue clothe. I was on a whale that was coloured blue as a fresh blue sea and ocean. It was big, huge, humongous and super anormase, this is a whale that liked me and liked taking me on an adventure. My house was on top of it because I wanted to make one on a whale and there was grass on the back of the whale so I grew a tree on top of it, a apple tree. My house was rusty and it looked like a witch house, I had to repair my house but I don’t have time.

All I do is watch me and the whale flying in the sky, then something zoomed past me, I raced outside to see what was it and where it went. I went outside then searched for it. Next I saw a lighthouse that had a land flying just like me and the whale, I saw something flying towards us, when it came closer I saw a boy and a bird flying and landed on my whale. He fell down with a thud sound, I helped him get up then the wind started blowing like the wind had hands and tried to pick me up and drop me down in the sea. The sun disappeared in the grey thundering clouds, The boy looked at me then flew away and went to it’s lighthouse by it’s bird wings that he made.

I was sad and lonely and no one to talk to. I went inside the house and stood by the door, then I saw a hook on my whale. I raced outside and looked where it came from, it was the boy again, he needed help. He’s lighthouse was blowing away from the whale  so I quickly grabbed the rope and tied it around the tree I grew. The whale pulled the island that had a lighthouse on it. The boys plan worked, the wind stopped blowing and the clouds were gone, all there was in the sky were blue sky and a bright yellow sun. Then me, my whale, my friend and his lighthouse sat off and waited for our next adventure.

THE END