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Thursday, July 6, 2017

My story about Ormie the Pig

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing. I hope you like my story about Ormie the Pig😎.

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                                             Orime the Pig

One day in the early morning, the sun shone bright like gold and it sparkled like a diamond in my house. I woke up by my alarm clock, it was 8:00 and I walked down stairs and went to the table to eat breakfast. I walked until I reached to the refrigerator and I smelled something very yummy, something very delicious, it was cookies, my favourite food.

Any ways, my name is Ormie the pig, I am bright pink coloured like a cotton candy, fat like a tractor and some of the pigs call me ugly because they think I am a blobfish. When people call me that I get sad like a snow getting melted and then I get angry like a dragon about to breath fire.  

Any ways, I was really excited and I really wanted to eat cookies for my breakfast, I went towards the fridge and reached for the cookies. I couldn’t reach them so I looked for something that I could use to get the cookies down from the fridge. I found a broom by my sofa so went to get it. Once I got my broom I went towards the fridge and then pointed the broom to the cookie jar and tried pushing it back so it will fall backwards and it failed and then I looked down, my floor was dusty so I sweeped it with my broom.

I got my small brown caramel coloured chair and then went back then ran as fast as I could then I jumped on the chair then I hit the fridge then I climbed onto the fridge and then reached for the cookie jar but suddenly, one of the door on the fridge opened and I was hanging then I let go and I fell on the ground. Then the ice fell on me, it was cold, good thing I had a juice in my pocket and I needed ice just for my fresh drink.

Then I got my brown, green, yellow and pink book and stacked it up, then got a iron board then went to get the bowling ball. Once I got the ball I went towards the fridge, next I sat on the iron board then threw the ball on the other side of the iron board, then it my… well you know what I mean. It hurted so bad that I was going to die and my plan failed.

Then I went to my garage then got six  boxes and then I put my turquoise coloured napkin around my neck then went up and onto the sixth box, i was happy and jumped on the box then my foot got stuck in the box then I slowly moved and reached it but the boxes lid opened and I went down and I was inside the box.

I went and looked under my bed for my new trampoline, once I found my trampoline I opened it up and then went back to the fridge with my trampoline, I dropped it near my fridge and then started bouncing. I bounced the tried to get it but it failed, I tried again and I failed and then I tried again then my trampoline broke into pieces. I was sad and started to cry like a talking snow about to melt to death.

The I went to the bathroom at got 2 plungers and then I went to my room and got two bands, I got one plunger and one band and tied it on my leg and I did the same thing to my other leg. Then I went towards the fridge and climbed the fridge, after that one of my plunger was on the other door and my other plunger was on the other door, the problem was that I couldn’t get my plunger off it and when I try too, the doors open. I tried and tried and tried to get it off the doors. I got angry like a dragon about to breath fire. Then I tried getting both of them off at the same time, then both of the doors opened and I hit the fridge and it hurts. I went to my room but then I realized that I one plunger on my head and one on my tail, I tried getting it off then one moved to my nose and the other one moved to my leg, then I tried again next both of them moved to my ears, then I pulled as hard as I could, then both of them moved to… well I don’t want to talk about it.

Then I went to get my chainsaw and my mask, once I found them I started my chainsaw then went towards the fridge and cutted the floor around it then the fridge and the cookie fell down, I fell down as well too, once I landed softly I turned around and saw that the fridge was not damaged and the fridge up and the cookies were on the fridge just like before. I was tired and thinked for other plans.

Then I got onto the zip liner but I failed and did not get the cookies because I was taking selfies of me and the cookie. I made a ramp and I got my tricycle and went fast as I could but it didn’t work. I tried jumping it, but that didn’t work. Then I went to the circus swings and climbed onto it and then swinged myself to the cookies and that didn’t work either and I had a bad landing.

I tried to get it with the stick and that didn’t work, I got my fishing rod and tried catching the cookie jar but instead I caught a fish, I tried using my rocket but that didn’t work either, I was angry and mad so I went to the airport to get a plane. Once I reached the airport I got into the plane then I opened the door and then jumped, after 3 seconds I took out my umbrella and then used it as a parachute. But the umbrella broke and I fell down and bounced to the fridge and then fell down.

I was so angry that I was going to blow up, I sat by the fridge and then I was crying, then something fell on me, the cookies were falling from the fridge, I got a cookie in my hand then took a bite, before I could the cookie jar fell on my head and it was stuck. It was my worst day ever.

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