I have been learning about being healthy. What to do to be healthy is you have to exercise and eat fruit, vegetables and drink water. You have to eat healthy and drink healthy everyday, every night and every morning. Don't eat junk because it is unhealthy and you can become fat. Also don't drink fizzy drink because it has lot of sugar and sugar is bad for your body.
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Hi Ranit, I really liked your post about Healthiness. I saw some mistakes in your post like, What to do to be healthy is you have to exercise and eat fruit, vegetables and drink water. That sentence doesn't make sense. The second mistake in your post like, Don't eat junk because it is unhealthy and you can become fat. That doesn't make sense as well. I think that you should read back your writing. The third mistake in your post like, Also don't drink fizzy drink because it has lot of sugar and sugar is bad for your body. As well that sentence doesn't make sense. I think that you should add a comma after , it has lot of sugar. Now the last mistake that you have made in this post like, fruits and vegetables:good. Why did you add that in your post? Hope you like my feedback/comment. Have a cool 😎 day!! Bye!!
ReplyDeleteHi Ranit, I saw an another mistake. You put Term 4 2016 November 7th. When Term 4, is in your labels. And the date is in top of the post. Hope you like my two feedback's/comments. Have a cool 😎 and an awesome day!! Bye!!
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