This week we watched a video about Ruin and we had to write it into a story. I wrote a story about Ruin and I am happy to share my writing with you. I hope you like it.
Ruin
Once upon a time there was an old dumped city with lots of trees and prickly bushes. I heard birds making noises and creepy bugs too. I was the only one left and I was on a mission spending my time looking for clues in the tower buildings. I went in one building called heaven nanosystems that had lots of things left in there, but broken.
One box was lying on the dusty and bushy floor, so I pushed it down from the window because that was the only way to open the metal box, then boom. It made a big noise like a volcano blast when I dropped it from the 87th floor to the ground. No one heard me from the empty buildings, so I went down to the box and it was still sealed.
I went close to it then kicked it so hard that it opened, there was stuff in there so I picked one glass that was shaped like a iphone. So I tried to turn it on with my blue electric power. Then suddenly I saw information about me and it said facility b, then I knew someone was on it too and hacked me and found information where I was, where abouts and how far from them to me, after that when I knew someone hacked me I heard a noise that sounded familiar.
The noise got louder and louder. I started running then the trees started shaking and the leaves started blowing in the cold air and out popped a gyrocopter. It started to follow me so I ran as fast as I could, the gyrocopter made an alarm noise so I ran faster, then I reached my motorbike, started it, then raced to the tunnels.
The gyrocopter went so fast that I quickly took a short cut, after that the gyrocopter made a quick turn too. Then it ran out of gas, and it sent two weird missiles that could shoot lasers. Then it made a gunshot noise and it was getting close to me. I picked up one boom and threw it at them but I missed because of their speed, so I picked up another one and this time I threw it in a car but it blasted so quickly that the car nearly hit the weird missiles.
Then there was a sign which said that the tunnel is not too far so I sped my motorcycle faster then I saw it, then we went in it then the missiles turned on their lights on and one turned on the square shape light then it opened something at the front like a camera. Then the purple light turned on then it got brighter then it shot laser on me but their missed me.
Then I saw the light of the tunnel which means that I am about to exit the tunnel shortly so I picked up my last boom then the missiles swapped places then it was the other missiles turn so I turned on my boom and the purple light turned on again in front of the missile then I quickly stitched the boom on the roof then I was out of the tunnel.
Then the two booms got closer to the boom then….Boom, the boom blasted and the two missiles broke down into pieces. I stopped then looked back at the missiles and their were completely deed so was about to go, but when I was I looked up and saw the gyrocopter in front of me. After that it started shooting me that I nearly got an heart attack, I raced to the broken bridge, then I went pass it then it made a quick turn then started shooting again and it was catching up then I slowed down the it made another quick turn.
Then I went fast again then took out my sword and made it glow in blue then it started shooting again so I went faster than I was on the broken bridge then I jumped out of my motorbike then I flew in the breezing air then landed on the gyrocopter and thrust my sword through the gyrocopter then it crashed boom….I stood up and saw that I survived and the gyrocopter lying on the bushy ground. I made a happy face so I picked up my sword and put it on my back then I picked up the glass device then walked away looking for more information, and I hope that there is no more gyrocopters and those weird missiles in the world, again…..
The End
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