I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Ranit, Your model is awesome. But the sentences doesn't make scene "Panther have really strong teeth that can rip peoples skin off". Anyway Great job!
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Hi Ranit, Your model is awesome. But the sentences doesn't make scene "Panther have really strong teeth that can rip peoples skin off". Anyway Great job!
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