My worst day ever (First draft)

Term 2 Week 3

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First Draft.

The Worst Day ever

(Lion)

Me and my pride of lions are resting in the warm sun smelling at the fresh air .  When we were resting we smelled something delicious and tasty, my mouth was watering. We saw  herds of buffalos coming toward us , so we  stay frezed and slowly moved towards them. The herd stopped and I told my pride of lions to charge at the baby buffalo. Slowly we got closer we then Boom, the chase was on.

It is a another beautiful day at African Savannah. In December my dad  is a leadbull of all herds and we are going rest in the sun. When we were resting in  the sunset. We were so tired that we needed a break . When we were going to have a drink then the pride of lions showed up.

Rounding to a tidy number

Animal Creator

Tigerbimon

Habitat: Forests in  India, Nepal, Bangladesh, China, Bhutan and Myanmar

Diet: omnivore

Head: Tiger

The mighty roar of Tigerbimon can be heard up to two miles away.  Hearing is their sharpest sense, five times better than humans, and their night vision is six times stronger than humans.

Body: Cheetah

Although equipped with a body made for speed and efficient killing

Legs: Hadada lbis

Hadada ibises are long-legged wading birds who belong to the same order as herons, storks, and flamingos.

Tail: Woolly Spider Monkey

With a prehensile (grasping) tail and long fingers that they hook over branches, they swing acrobatically through the forest canopy.

My Learning Goals

I have done my learning goals. Learning goals mean that I will be trying to achieve my goals for this year. 

Battle of Kruger National Park Sequence.

W.A.L.T: Recall Events in Order.

	The herd of buffalo are walking along the river bank.
	A pride of  lions are resting in the sun.
	The pride of lions are ready to catch the baby buffalo for their dinner.
	The pride of lions came and chasing the buffalo.
	The lions chased a cute baby buffalo.
	The lions made the baby buffalo go into the water until the crocodile came for his dinner.
	The herd of buffalos surrounded the lions.
	The buffalos kicked and punched the lions.
	The baby Buffalo is rescued by the herd of buffalo.