My story about Lily and the Snowman

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about Lily and the snowman and have a great day 😎. But this time it is in a slideshow.

Lily and the snowman

My DLO about 20 thing we should say more often

This week we have been doing our writing, well almost like writing, we have been writing 20 things that we should say more often, I have finished my DLO and recordings and I am happy to share it with you, I hope you like it and have a great day😎👍.

20 things we should say more often

My Recording

My penguins DLO

This week we have been researching about Penguins, we had to go website to website to find true information about penguins, I made a DLO-Digital Learning Object and I am happy to share it with you, I hope you like it and have a great day😎👍.

W.A.L.T: We are learning to 

Predicting

I am learning to make and check predictions  (smart guesses) before, during and after reading.

Summarising

I am learning to summarise and retell  the main ideas and important information from what I have read in my own words.

Evaluating

I am learning to think carefully about what I am reading and how I use the text.

My DLO about Mars

This week we have been researching about Mars. I have finished my DLO-Digital Learning Object and I am happy to share my Mars DLO with you. I hope you like it and have a great day 😎👍.

Mars DLO

My Terrifying Experience

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about my experience and have a great day 😎.

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My Experience

One day in a early morning, the water was sparkling like a diamond, the sun raised from the sea and into the sky and shined like gold. The mountains were big and sharp like a sharp knife, any ways, my name is Danny. I was in my small, white wooden boat, I was sailing through the sparkling sea, I pedaled with my two pedals to the mountains to ride my bike on the top of the mountain.

Once we reached to the land, I jumped out of the front of the boat then I took out my black and pink bike and sat on the soft seat and started my journey to the mountains, I rode my bike over sharp rocks and steep rocks. Suddenly, I reached to a steep log that I had to cross, my heart started beating 100 miles per hour. I took a deep breath in, then let it go. I started paddling slowly and I made it to the other side of the steep log and then I leaped rock to rock and landed safely on the ground.

I reached to the waterfall, the water was sparkling like crystal, the water was crashing into a pond, the water was fresh and clear to swim in. I leaped across the steep waterfall with my bike, I made it safely to the other side of the waterfall. I was so excited that I wasn’t even scared at all, then I rode over a steep hill then went over sharp rocky rocks and made at the top of the hill. I jumped, leaped and bounced over waterfalls and hills.

Then I got off my bike, then i picked my bike up and onto my shoulder then walked up the steep rocky mountain. Once I reached up at the top of the of the mountain, I got on my bike and rushed down the rocky mountain, I felt the cold air while I was riding my bike, it was nice and cold. Once I reached down the mountain I went rode my bike up the mountain that was beside the mountain I went up in the first place.

I rode my bike up the mountain. Next, I saw a straight rocky path, so I crossed the rocky path that had sharp rocks. Once I crossed the rocky path, I picked up my bike again and climbed a very steep mountain. I climbed and climbed until my legs were wobbling like jelly, my legs were tired, but I tried my best to reach at the top of the mountain.

Once I reached the top, I was puffed, I was tired and my heart was beating 100 miles per hour. I putted my bike down and got onto my bike, the clouds were all around me, they were cold and soggy wet. The sun shined bright in my legs and arms making it warm. The view was great and amazing, no one ever made this way up.

After looking at the view, I picked up my bike and climbed down, then got on my bike and rode down the mountain. I came to a steep slippery path, I crossed it slowly then once I made it I came to a broken path. So I pedaled faster than jumped from a high rock to a lower rock. Then I pedaled even faster like I never pedaled faster before.

After that, I came to a pond, so I crossed it, but I did not get wet. I jumped rock to rock that was in the pond. Once I crossed  the clear blue pond, I raced to the beach. The sun was going into the sea so I quickly rushed to the beach and watch the sunset. Once I reached by the grass land I saw a fence right in front of me.

I braced myself and pedaled a bit more faster then once I reached the fence, I hit it by my front wheel, I leaned forwards, and did a front flip with my bike. The I landed on the soft sand, I rode my bike until I was just in time to watch the sunset. It was my best experience ever in my life.

THE END