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Friday, September 8, 2017

My DLO about 20 thing we should say more often

This week we have been doing our writing, well almost like writing, we have been writing 20 things that we should say more often, I have finished my DLO and recordings and I am happy to share it with you, I hope you like it and have a great day😎👍.

20 things we should say more often



My Recording


My penguins DLO

This week we have been researching about Penguins, we had to go website to website to find true information about penguins, I made a DLO-Digital Learning Object and I am happy to share it with you, I hope you like it and have a great day😎👍.


W.A.L.T: We are learning to 
Predicting
I am learning to make and check predictions  (smart guesses) before, during and after reading.

Summarising
I am learning to summarise and retell  the main ideas and important information from what I have read in my own words.

Evaluating
I am learning to think carefully about what I am reading and how I use the text.



Friday, September 1, 2017

My DLO about Mars

This week we have been researching about Mars. I have finished my DLO-Digital Learning Object and I am happy to share my Mars DLO with you. I hope you like it and have a great day 😎👍.

Mars DLO


My Terrifying Experience

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about my experience and have a great day 😎.

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My Experience


One day in a early morning, the water was sparkling like a diamond, the sun raised from the sea and into the sky and shined like gold. The mountains were big and sharp like a sharp knife, any ways, my name is Danny. I was in my small, white wooden boat, I was sailing through the sparkling sea, I pedaled with my two pedals to the mountains to ride my bike on the top of the mountain.

Once we reached to the land, I jumped out of the front of the boat then I took out my black and pink bike and sat on the soft seat and started my journey to the mountains, I rode my bike over sharp rocks and steep rocks. Suddenly, I reached to a steep log that I had to cross, my heart started beating 100 miles per hour. I took a deep breath in, then let it go. I started paddling slowly and I made it to the other side of the steep log and then I leaped rock to rock and landed safely on the ground.

I reached to the waterfall, the water was sparkling like crystal, the water was crashing into a pond, the water was fresh and clear to swim in. I leaped across the steep waterfall with my bike, I made it safely to the other side of the waterfall. I was so excited that I wasn’t even scared at all, then I rode over a steep hill then went over sharp rocky rocks and made at the top of the hill. I jumped, leaped and bounced over waterfalls and hills.

Then I got off my bike, then i picked my bike up and onto my shoulder then walked up the steep rocky mountain. Once I reached up at the top of the of the mountain, I got on my bike and rushed down the rocky mountain, I felt the cold air while I was riding my bike, it was nice and cold. Once I reached down the mountain I went rode my bike up the mountain that was beside the mountain I went up in the first place.

I rode my bike up the mountain. Next, I saw a straight rocky path, so I crossed the rocky path that had sharp rocks. Once I crossed the rocky path, I picked up my bike again and climbed a very steep mountain. I climbed and climbed until my legs were wobbling like jelly, my legs were tired, but I tried my best to reach at the top of the mountain.

Once I reached the top, I was puffed, I was tired and my heart was beating 100 miles per hour. I putted my bike down and got onto my bike, the clouds were all around me, they were cold and soggy wet. The sun shined bright in my legs and arms making it warm. The view was great and amazing, no one ever made this way up.

After looking at the view, I picked up my bike and climbed down, then got on my bike and rode down the mountain. I came to a steep slippery path, I crossed it slowly then once I made it I came to a broken path. So I pedaled faster than jumped from a high rock to a lower rock. Then I pedaled even faster like I never pedaled faster before.

After that, I came to a pond, so I crossed it, but I did not get wet. I jumped rock to rock that was in the pond. Once I crossed  the clear blue pond, I raced to the beach. The sun was going into the sea so I quickly rushed to the beach and watch the sunset. Once I reached by the grass land I saw a fence right in front of me.

I braced myself and pedaled a bit more faster then once I reached the fence, I hit it by my front wheel, I leaned forwards, and did a front flip with my bike. The I landed on the soft sand, I rode my bike until I was just in time to watch the sunset. It was my best experience ever in my life.

THE END

Thursday, August 17, 2017

My story about The catch

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about The Catch and have a great day😎.

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The Catch

One day in a early morning, there was a boy named Parowa he was 11 years old and he was the only child in the village. Everyone in his village wanted him to get a big fish for everyone. But that boy couldn’t, he couldn’t catch one single fish. But his dad told him that if he doesn't, he will be punished.

He picked up his leaf hat, his fishing rod and his basket and went to the lake. Once he reached the lake he was tired, thirsty and hungry, and there was a problem, the lake was drying and the fishes were gone. But not all of them, they were little ones, so he swung my fishing rod and threw the rods string in the lake.

He felt a pull so he pulled as hard as he could and a little fish came out and then landed on the ground. He picked it up and then dropped it in the basket. He was sad so he didn’t mind, he knew that there will be more big fish.

Then suddenly he heard a scream behind the bushes, so he creeped towards the bush and looked behind the bushes. It was a fox stuck by a vine around one of its legs, He picked up his knife and cut the vine in half. The fox turned around and then he pounced at the boy, he fell down and the fox climbed on his chest and made a angry looking face.

Then the fox smelled something, the fox ran to his basket and sat down, The boy was looking at his face and the smiled at him and took the fish from the boys basket. The fox ran and under the thorn bush, the boy tried catching the fox so he went under the thorn bush, once he was on the other side of the thorn bush he saw the fox and tried catching it.

The fox went up the big hill and the boy was scared, so he tried his best and then the fox made it on the top of the hill and ran. The boy climbed until his favourite fell down, he was angry because of that fox so he started climbing faster.

Once he reached the top of the hill he saw fogs and couldn’t see the fox anywhere until the fogs were gone and could see the fox now. He was sitting by a big ocean. The boy was amazed, then the fox threw the fish in the ocean and it swimmed away.

Parowa was happy with the fox now so he started fishing here and then a big fish jumped so he caught it with his big fishing rod and he got a almost little fish and gave it to the fox. Then the boy went home to have fish for dinner. Then the fox started thinking about how kind he was and that wasn’t the fox, it was the god.

THE END

My story about Friendly Parrot

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about The friendly Parrot and have a great day😎.

Here's the picture




The Friendly Parrot

One day in the middle of the night, the sky was dark like a black hole. The thunder roared like a lion, straight rain falls all over town. Everyone was inside their house sitting by the warm red fire that was blazing by the chimney. That day in the scary night, a little child named Serena was sleeping in her bed but she couldn’t sleep at all.

Her legs started shaking, her mouth was shaking too, she hid under her blanket and waited until she sleeps but she couldn’t. She was scared because there was a parrot right next to her, she was scared of Parrots because last time there was a Parrot that came and sat by her and the girl Serena thought it was trying to hurt her, but it wasn’t. Her mum tried to tell her that the Parrot didn’t attacked her, it was trying to be nice.

But Serena didn’t trusted them and kept saying that the Parrot did attack her, so here mum and dad brought her a parrot to prove that parrots don’t attack. Serena was scared like she was about to die, her heart started beating faster like a car going 100 miles per hour. SHe tried to close her eyes and sleep.

Then the parrot that was green and yellow with silver stripes on it’s wings started screaming like a tiger attacked it. Then the Parrot landed on the Serena’s head and then started sleeping on the girl’s head. The girl started crying so loud that her mum and dad came rushing to her room. Serena told them that the Parrot was attacking her, mum and dad was not happy.

Her dad told her that the parrot was just sleeping on her head because the parrots cage was cold, so the girl thought for a minute what happened when she got attacked by the bird. Then she knew that it wasn’t attacking her, it was asking for food. Then she knew that birds don’t attack and she was happy. So she went to her bed and slept in her soft cozy bed and waited for the morning.

THE END

Friday, August 11, 2017

My DLO about 1800s

This week we have been researching about what happened in the 1800's, then we had to find information  and make a DLO-Digital Learning Object. I have finished my DLO about 1800's and I am happy to share it with you. I hope you learn something from my DLO and have a great day😎.