My Writing about The Cloud

This is my story about The Cloud, before we started writing we had to watch the video carefully then think about how you would feel. Then once we started writing we started adding punctuation, juicy words and make sure the sentence make sense. Once we had finished our story we had to post it on our blog, I hope you like my story about The Cloud and I hope you have a great day😎.

The Cloud

Once upon a time, there was a cloud that was not like any other clouds, other clouds work together to make big storms and destroy homes and make floods. But this cloud was kind and helpful. He was fluffy, white as a snow, grey as a bright grey moon, he looked like a cotton candy, soft, clever, friendly, brave, strong and special. He liked travelling around the world and helping them. One day in the early morning the clouds moved to a city called New York City, and that kind cloud went to the city without the other unkind clouds, this cloud came from the sea and it wanted to save New York City if they needed him, so he started looking around for the people that needed him.

When the cloud went into the city he thought that it was beautiful and everyone was safe, he went over the cooling system and it blew him up and the cloud thought that it was fun. All the people thought that he was dangerous, so some people keep their things inside until the cloud goes away, he was lost by travelling around so he went to see himself in the tower. He felt sad and lonely that he came far from the other clouds so he went back, but when he was the clouds were gone and left him in the city.

He got sad until he knew what to do in the city, he thought that he should have fun in the city, so he went to the town. Once he reached at the town he thought that what should he do first to have some fun with other people, so he had an idea, he blocked the traffic light and he the cloud was glowing, everyone in the town thought he was dangerous, the cloud felt even more sad that no one needs me and they were looking at him because they thought that he was a dump cloud. So the cloud went somewhere that no people have been, the cloud went to a car park that was rusty and closed for years, then the cloud wanted to see what was inside the dark rusty car park. But when he turned on his lightning on for some light to see, a German Shepherd dog barked so loud at him that he got a fright.

He went past a tower and the people in the office were scared of the cloud so he went away then he heard a siren somewhere so he followed the sound. Once he reached there he saw fire and some firefighters fighting the fire, he thought that it was a hard job for them so he made a thunder sound and it started raining the fire looked like it had hands and and it wanted to grab me and destroy me. Everyone was pleased and lucky that there was a friendly cloud. Just in time, the fire was out he thought that no one needed help anymore so he went back to the clouds. Everyone was safe in New York City and the people thought that he was smart even he was small, cute and furry and everyone was happy.

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My Writing of Tom True Heart

This week we have been writing about Tom True Heart, Tom True Heart is a boy that is a size of a thumb. We watched a video of it and write that how to save his six brothers and their princess brides. I wrote a story about it and I would like to share it with you. I hope you like it and leave a comment. I hope you have a great day 😎.

Tom true heart

I was a tiny boy and I was the size of a thumb.  I was found by 14 big people who took care of me and I was enjoying with them. I had a new home and a new family, my  six brothers and their princess brides liked me and they liked to play with me a lot. Until that dark and spooky night the storm was worse and it was raining bad.

Everyone was sleeping in their soft and smooth beds and I was sleeping in my small bed. In the morning when I woke up from my bed, the window was open and the sun rises in the blue sky, it was shining so bright in my eye.

I quickly got out of my bed and I saw nobody in bed and I wondered why. So I went to check if anyone was home, but when I checked the whole hall and their rooms but nobody was there and if they went somewhere they did not leave without me.

Then I saw a message on the door written on paper and on that paper was a picture of my family tied by a rope around their mouth. I got scared and worried, so I tried calling them by shouting but nobody heard me. So I called my uncle on the phone, once he reached our house I asked him questions about where they are but he did not know where they went.

Then the phone rang so my uncle picked it up then I heard my uncle saying that I am at home, so my uncle gave the phone to me and he said that it is the man that stole your family and he wants to talk to you. He gave me the phone and I got nervous then it said to me that to come and battle me then he said that if you win you can take your family, but if you lose I take their life and become stronger.

I got very scared that I quickly put the phone down, then it rang again and it was him again and he quickly said that he took his friend because he was weak and he wanted to rule the world and be the king of this world then he put the phone down.

My uncle heard everything that he said and he was angry, after that he went home to get something so I went in the room and watched the sunset and thinking what to do to get them back. Then I heard my uncle came back from home then I looked out the window and saw him bringing something inside the house with a pirate chest box but it was little, he came to my room and told me about his job when he was 35 years old.

He worked in a place where they make swords and shields and armors. It sounded like he had a good job but it sounded dangerous too, so he opened the chest then showed me the little sword that he made for me and other kinds of swords.

He said that you can use this to battle the man who captured your family. I was worried and scared,I thought that will not help me and I was little and the man was big and I did not know how to save my  six brothers and their princess brides and mum and dad too.

He had a secret but he told me that I have to find it out, so he made me wear some warm cloths and gave me wooden shield and the metal sword that had a secret in it. He quickly went to start the car then he came then he picked me up, next he ran to the car then we sat on the hard seat and drove to the woods.

It took a while to drive to the woods, so while my uncle was driving the car I took out my sword and searched for the secret that was in the sword that my uncle told me, I couldn’t find it so I put it back in the chest. When the car stopped next my uncle said that we arrived at the woods, I asked my uncle that is being little a good thing or a bad thing, my uncle said that it is a very good thing being little.

He gave me the sword out of the chest, after that when he gave me the sword he said bye to me then drove back home. I turned around and looked at the tall trees and the dark side inside the woods, then my creepy and terrifying adventure begins.

I entered the woods then I started walking and searching for my six brothers and their princess brides and mum and dad too. I looked for them and I tried shouting but no one yelled back. Suddenly I heard a eagle that came down and down on the ground and it was big as a cat, it’s eyes were black and white and it’s whole body was brown and the beak was shiny yellow as a yellow bright sun and gold.

I took out my sword then I was getting scared and my legs were getting wobbly then eagle bowed at me, I was confused and did not know why did the eagle bowed, then it lifted me up with its beak then I landed on the eagles back then it flew high I thought I was going to die. Then it took me into a hole that was in a tallest tree ever, once the eagle entered the hole I saw that there were six nest  hanging and on the nest were six eggs on them and their were coloured white with blue spots, and I saw another egg which was broken and it made me sad that one baby eagle died.

The eagle showed me the photo of the man and the eagle found the map when the man was running home because of the storm. Then I knew the man now, it was the man who made me small and sended me in the deepest wood then I ended up with new family. I showed the eagle the picture and said to it to take me to this man, but it did not do anything,  it just made a big yawn and went to sleep.

It got darker and darker in the woods, I was watching the back and grey clouds covering the orange and yellow sky. Then it started drizzling and then the thunder made a big loud noise like an airplane’s engine getting louder and louder ready for lift off, I was tired and sleepy so I went to sleep. Next day I woke up and the sun was shining bright as a yellow glitter in my eye, the eagle went to get food for me and it self.

Once the eagle came with the food which was a rabbit and vegetables. I said thanks to the eagle, then I said that can I call you Lucy and then the eagle smiled and it made me go on its back. Then I climbed onto its back then we flew high in the air, once we went back home at the tree we were so sweaty and puffed, then we heard someone screaming.

I saw my brothers and there princess brides with mum and dad, I was angry and worried what he was going to do with them. I needed a plan and I just knew how to rescue my family when the eagle Lucy was going to fly to them. I told Lucy our plan them we were ready to charge at the man, once we were ready we flew out of the hole from the tree then we raced to the man. Once we reached there, I told Lucy to hide somewhere that no one can see you.

Then I went under the door and I was finally inside, I spotted someone breaking the metal long cage, it was my family and I have finally found them. After I’ve found my family the man saw me, and then the man said to battle me now, then I took out my sword then the man took out his sword and then he charged at me, then something magical happened.

My sword was glowing in blue and the glow got bigger and bigger and bigger that the sword electric shocked the man and he flew into the air, then landed on his back hard. My family saw it and they were shocked, they’d never seen a magical sword before and they were cheering for me. The man charged at me again then Lucy the eagle came and charged at the man, Lucy pushed the man down then my sword electric shock the man again so hard that it blew the man far away from his home.

Then I got the keys then opened the cage, then my family was free and they all hugged me and said thank you. They were very proud of me then the eagle Lucy came down and landed on the ground behind me. I was very proud with Lucy the eagle flew away back to it’s home. I missed Lucy and I never saw her again. Then my dad lead the way home, then we heard a car and it was my uncle. We were happy and starving, so we went home and had a great dinner at home and we all lived happily.

THE END

My Experience

Spencer Park Day

Last Friday, we had to go to our field trip at Spencer Park. We were going to stay there from 3 pm. We were going there for some experience. It was a sunny day and in the morning we got numbers in our hands from our teacher Miss Millard, then the bell rang so we had to sit on the basketball court in a line with our bags and hats on our head, then the bus arrived so our teacher Mr Scott told us and asked us about the rules when we go there.

My mum went with me as a parent helper, but in she went in the different car, then we stood up and walked to the bus then got on it then went to Spencer park, I enjoyed riding in the bus because I saw lots of things and then I was bored so I readed my story book called (Geronimo Stilton).

As we we reached to the Spencer park, we got off the bus and all of us went near the tree then the teacher told us to make a line and Miss Millard made the children into five groups. Then we went to the spencer beach. Once we reached at the Spencer beach, it was so lovely and beautiful and it was exciting.

I was having so much fun there, my friends and me found so many shells so we hid it somewhere that no one can find it then we covered it with sand, then I went to my mum and asked for a piece of fruit. After spending my time there for 20 minutes we came back to the park and had our break.

I ate some fruits and snacks then we went to play in the playing area and there were flying fox, monkey bars, spider webs, slides and swings. I went on the monkey bars first and I was keep failing so I went on the flying fox. I was good at it but I couldn’t sit on it so I went on the slide then on the spider web, I was playing tag on the spider web with my friends, it was fun playing tag.

After playing we went to Aldrien forest and walked for 20 minutes. For the 20 minutes we were looking for the bird hideout then we went further and then our teacher Miss Millard asked us that what can you see and I saw mountains, tall trees,birds and swamps. When we went a bit further there were big yellow grasses and it looked just like Africa.

We went far and we went past the bird hideout so we had to go back, but first we sat down for a while then we all drank water then we stood up then walked back then we made it so we went up stairs then beside us said that what birds can you see and there were some birds drinking water and some birds hiding in the bushes. So we went back down then back to the park.

Once we reached there, we all sat down under a tree then had lunch, I had hot dog for lunch and it was good and delicious. After finishing our lunch we went to play and I played the same things again then the teacher called us and we sat down on the green grass and  he told us about the rules when we play because there was an another school.

So once he told us the rules, he gave us another 20 minutes to play on the play area, and I went to play in the same things again then the bus came then it was time to go but first the teacher told us that we can have fruit so I picked up an apple, ate it, sat on the bus, then went back to school. I had lots of fun, I was happy and it was an awesome adventure.

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