Haiku Poem
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Namaskaram(hello) Ranit, I’m Joel and I am at Hornby Primary School. I enjoyed the part when you described your haiku poetry about. Did you know the facts you have used were really awesome. I couldn't even stop reading it. Next time you could use more describing and juicy words. Did you think of using more detailed words in your poem?
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